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    Jades Techniques and styles

    Post by Akuchi on Fri Dec 06, 2013 11:09 pm

    Major essence
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    Name:Symbol Manifestation
    Type: Manifest
    Classification:Support
    Description:The user manifest drawings using their essence, the symbols can take nearly any shape allowing for versatility. Once formed the symbols have a variety of uses involving tricking the opponents.

    Name:Force Destruction
    Type: Destroy
    Classification:Offensive
    Description:The user can use their essence to control the energies of destruction and manipulate them to their advantage, allowing for large area destruction techniques, focused area destruction techniques or directed focus attack techniques which are comprised of pure essence showing as a extremely dark purple essence to everyone and not just those which can see essence.

    Hybrid essence
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    Name:Symbol Magic
    Type: Destroy+Manifest
    Classification:Support
    Description:
    Through the use of Manifest&Destroy essence one can form symbol magic. Symbol magic can draw destructive power out of particular shapes and seals. This style is very versatile: the user can manifest the illusions of Manifest into reality, likewise the user also can Manifest destruction onto opponents and finally can do the reverse and turn destroy into pure Manifest.

    Symbol Manifestation
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    Name:Symbol Manifestation: Engraving Symbol
    Type:Manifest
    Classification:Support
    Description: The ability to concentrate their manifest essence allowing them to apply writing to anything that they can see with their eyes. used in combination with Symbol related tech like a trigger for it.

    Name:Symbol Manifestation: Mental form
    Type:Manifest
    Classification:Offensive
    Description: Through the use of essence the user can form symbols into numerous objects or shapes which are generally perceived inside the victims mind, for mental deception and written on other Manifest Essence so that the user will be able to combat them as well as modify them by writing more symbols on them.

    Name:Symbol Manifestation:
    Type:Manifest
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    Force Destruction
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    Name: Force Destruction: Terra Change
    Type:Destroy
    Classification:Offensive
    Description:Through the use of destroy essence this deals area effect direct damage for use against multiple targets with the damage being spread out among them. Having a lower effectiveness against single opponents while being highly effective against clusters of enemies or structures.


    Name: Force Destruction: Superior Destroyer
    Type:Destroy
    Classification:Support
    Description: the process of compressing and stockpiling Essence into your body to discharge along side techniques resulting in an Over-powering effect using the stockpiled essence to act as a damage modifier to increase the lethality of your Essence techniques.

    Name: Force Destruction:
    Type:Destroy
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    Symbol Magic
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    Name: Symbol Magic: Trap world
    Type:Destroy&Manifest
    Classification:Offensive
    Description:The user draws symbols upon objects and uses them to trap targets in symbols which can deal pain, destroy objects above or under the symbol and even hold victims. The user also can use Engraving Symbol in construction of these traps with formations of those symbols resulting in different effects, multi layering of traps and dual effects.

    Name:Symbol Magic: Mental world
    Type:Destroy&Manifest
    Classification:Support
    Description:The user manifest destructive symbols in Mental Form as a means to direct destruction essence to target Manifest Essence specifically.

    Name:Symbol Magic:
    Type:Destroy&Manifest
    Classification:Offensive
    Description:


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    Re: Jades Techniques and styles

    Post by Vixen on Sat Dec 07, 2013 12:03 pm

    Breaking Everything Down for you.

    Force Destruction: This has actually the least problems would be fine assuming you were able to have your minor styles in the correct format.
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    Terra Change is fine, of course you could of been more specific in saying that it deals area effect direct damage for use against multiple targets with the damage being spread out among them. Having a lower effectiveness against single opponents while being highly effective against clusters of enemies or structures. This would be your Offensive.

    Superior Destroyer instead of having it being gathering and firing why not just have it be the process of compressing and stockpiling Essence into your body to discharge along side techniques resulting in an Over-powering effect using the stockpiled essence to act as a damage modifier to increase the lethality of your Essence techniques. That's Support right there.

    Gaseous is just a no, one, manipulating the state itself would be any of the Conduits being required while dealing internal bypassing damage would need Phase. If you can't think of anything right now, leave it blank until you get a Conduit there is no need to fill out everything now.

    Symbol Manifestation: Pure Manifest is Illusionary, meaning these Symbols can't cause any damage even mild discomfort nor can they actually affect physical things in terms of damage, deception etc that's fine as long as there is no actual physical effect. That would be Manifest + Destroy. Also if your going with symbols why are you adding in Creatures, it should just be symbols that's it.

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    Engraving Symbol you can have it be support and have it be used in combination with your Symbol Magic like a trigger for it, as in lay down the Engraving Symbol and transfer Essence to it to deal Destroy Essence damage though said Symbol.

    Mental Form would be the same process however instead of writing them on actual targets they would be written on other Manifest Essence so that your character will be able to combat them as well as modify them by writing more symbols on them. This would be your Offensive and would be restricted to dealing no damage but being able to modify and alter other Manifest and lay the ground work for destroying them through Symbol Magic.

    Physical is a no just remove that either leave it blank or you can try to develop a defensive version of it. Perhaps writing symbols on others in response to other external Manifest Essence, you would have to make this rather specific with Symbols meant on restricting specific Manifest Essence techniques and the like that you have encountered, it would best be suited for countering out people who use Manifest while in battle.

    Symbol Magic - First things first, Manifest + Destroy means you can manifest the illusions of Manifest into reality, likewise you can also Manifest destruction onto opponents and finally you can do the reverse and turn destroy into pure Manifest. There are others but those are the three main things a combination can do. Since you decided to incorporate symbols and the like no boosting of things destructive capabilities, that's Restore + Destroy through and through. Restore covers Enhancing and the like.

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    Trap World - This is fine, drawing symbols and using that to inflict damage that's fine, you might want to include being able to use Engraving Symbol in construction of these traps with formations of those symbols resulting in different effects, multi layering of traps etc etc. All of these can affect physical things and can or can not deal damage it's according to how you want to make them honestly. You can probably even make actual traps which would be perfect when you eventually get a Base and the like. This is your Support.

    Mental World - Usually I'd say do this, but seeing how your Manifest is, that honestly wouldn't be smart, it would be better if you make it similar to trap world in that you use Mental Form as a means to direct your destruction essence to target Manifest Essence specifically. It wouldn't deal damage but it would work to wreck people who use Manifest due to being a branch which works on dealing damage to them directly and destroying them. This is your Offensive

    Destructive World - Scrap it just like Physical Form, you can leave it blank or you can make a sort of Enchanting thing it would rely heavily on Conduits and Totems so I would say go around collecting conduits and make lines of techs for them which rely on "enchanting" objects and items to give them set damage of that specific conduit. Make it Reap and then just swap conduits so you can have diversity. Sure it'll make it cost a lot more but this is a support thing and if you make them really high rank the enchantments would be worth the extra cost due to long duration. Then again you can always make non Conduit related techniques which extend the duration of these Enchantments etc etc. This would be your Defensive.

    ^ Go over what I said and if you have questions I'll be in chat.

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    Re: Jades Techniques and styles

    Post by Akuchi on Sat Dec 07, 2013 11:10 pm

    Style Name:Nature's Blend
    Damage Focus: Style
    Classification: Defensive
    Weapon Focus: Creature
    Range: Long
    Description:The user rarely if ever will confront a wild animal without first wishing to do so, the user uses hiding techniques and soothing and calming tactics to befriend creatures and tame ones they deem worthy. This style uses heavy focus on avoiding wild animals entirely.

    Style Name:Survivalist Cook
    Damage Focus: Style
    Classification: Offensive
    Weapon Focus: Unarmed
    Range: mid
    Description:This style focuses on the user knowing how to cook and properly clean food this also includes techniques which help the user form makeshift cooking areas. In terms of cooking the user cook with our without the use of a heat source having many viable and versatile ways to make food edible.

    Natures Blend
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    Minor Style Name:Natures Camouflage
    Damage Focus: Status
    Classification: Defensive
    Weapon Focus:Creature
    Range: long
    Description:Through the use of manifest essence and other natural hiding techniques, the user avoids wild animals by using a plethora of specific techniques intended in hiding them from herbivores, carnivorous and omnivores.

    Minor Style Name:Taming
    Damage Focus: Status
    Classification: Defensive
    Weapon Focus: Creature
    Range: mid
    Description:This style revolves around the taming and use of animals through taming with non hostile techniques. This style rather focuses on the befriending and soothing of animals to assist the user.

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    Survivalist Cook
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    Minor Style Name:Food cleaning
    Damage Focus: Status
    Classification: Support
    Weapon Focus:Unarmed
    Range: long
    Description:The user will clean food readying it for cooking, the user uses their destroy essence to destroy toxins and thing dangerous when eaten. Through this style one can extend the time before foods begins to spoil and even make naturally poisonous foods edible.

    Minor Style Name:Cooking
    Damage Focus: Status
    Classification: Support
    Weapon Focus:Unarmed
    Range: short
    Description:A style based on the ability to take raw edibles and turn them into gourmet dishes which are safe to eat and tasty, one can cook without the use of man made cooking tools, or with makeshift versions.

    Minor Style Name:Priority Cooking
    Damage Focus: Status
    Classification: Support
    Weapon Focus:Unarmed
    Range: short
    Description:The user has learned to make fire and pots and other things needed for cooking out of things within the natural environment.
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    Re: Jades Techniques and styles

    Post by Fate on Sun Dec 08, 2013 11:51 am

    These are fine sure you could of done a lot more explaining to make it more fleshed out other than Vixen's general explanations but I suppose those will do.

    Just know the poison destruction and stuff will be looked at harshly and will only affect naturally poisonous things it will have to be specific not oh all E-rank poisons no, if say it's a Gray spore then it will have to be Grey Spore and etc. Your all approved either way. Taming likewise, I do not expect generalities, it won't be as simple as Carnivores, Herbavores and Omnivores it will go by creature family. After all no two creatures are alike either way.

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    Re: Jades Techniques and styles

    Post by Akuchi on Sun Dec 08, 2013 8:27 pm

    Name: Natures Camouflage: Gigginox juvenile
    Damage Focus:Style
    Rank: E
    Classification: Defensive
    Range:Short

    Description:The first technique intended on combating the Gigginox family, through the use of ones manifest essence they form a illusion over themselves making them look like a juvenile giggi, this camouflages the user from juvenile giggi with a 50% chance to camouflage.

    Name:Trap World: Triangular Cage
    Damage Focus:Essence
    Rank: E
    Classification: Support
    Range:Mid

    Description:The user draws a Triangle using engraving symbol, the triangle will remain on the surface it was drawn on(unable to be seen unless by someone who can see essence) until someone or something passes over or under It. Once someone passes over it they become trapped within a triangular symbol in which if they try to exit the cage will deal E rank damage upon contact.

    Name:Trap world: Ring
    Damage Focus:Essence
    Rank: E
    Classification: Offensive
    Range:Short

    Description:Through the use of Engraving Symbol the user will draw a Ring upon a single victim, it is fully formed on a body part the post it is activated but takes one post to move between ligaments. The ring wil shoot a E rank blast straight into the target from the ring to the specific area its symbol is covering.

    Name:Superior Destroyer: Ring symbol assist 1
    Damage Focus:Essence
    Rank: E
    Classification: Support
    Range:Long

    Description:The user begins to stockpile E rank essence for as many post as they wish with the limit being 5 E ranks, once this is done the user will send the stockpiled essence with their next offensive Ring symbol essence technique causing the technique in question to be boosted by the amount of stockpiled E ranks.


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    Re: Jades Techniques and styles

    Post by Fate on Wed Dec 11, 2013 10:23 am

    You would first have to see the Giggi. Rather than having it be 50 percent against a Submissive it should be 50 percent against other Giggi. It is an E-rank after all. D-rank can be 100 percent when around other Giggi, C-rank can be Submissive, B-rank can be Dominant.

    Make the Engraving Symbol E-rank techs as well one for a Triangle the other for a Circle. Then you can learn the Trap World. Include the speed at which it is drawn it can't be instant effect even if you just look at what your writing on. E rank speeds for E-rank symbols better symbols will have a faster casting time and better traps will have a faster activation time. Remember traps aren't all about damage.

    Superior Destroyer, make it specific to the Symbol and have the charging be post based perhaps 1 post after setting up the trap with it gradually accumulating the longer the symbol is set capping out at 5 E-ranks. Then use that with your traps to inflict more damage.

    Think strategically doing it the other way would just hurt you with recoil this way your just going to make the technique explode as a recoil rather than getting hurt yourself. Think of Symbols as mines and the Trap World as what the mines contain.

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    Re: Jades Techniques and styles

    Post by Akuchi on Tue Dec 24, 2013 6:22 pm

    Name:Engraving Symbol: Ring
    Damage Focus:Manifest
    Rank: E
    Classification: Supplementary
    Range:Long

    Description:The user concentrates their essence forming a fiery purple glowing essence upon the fingers, the user then starts drawing a small ring upon a target. The ring is 2 inches wide in the middle and forms at a E rank speed due too the small size.

    Name:Engraving Symbol: Triangle
    Damage Focus:Manifest
    Rank: E
    Classification: Supplementary
    Range:Long

    Description:The user concentrates their essence forming a fiery purple glowing essence upon the fingers, the user then begins forming a triangle on a surface of their choosing the triangle forms at E rank speed and is 15 feet at each side.

    Name:Natures Blend: Juvenile camouflage
    Damage Focus:Status
    Rank: E
    Classification: Defensive
    Range:Mid

    Description:The user will simply walk past juvenile Carnivores. Lessing their chances of being attacked by these specific creatures and increasing the chance to calm the creatures. This gives a 50% chance to calm Juvenile carnivores, and a 15% chance to increase taming techs efficiency for the specific animal.

    Name:Survivalist Cook: Jerky
    Damage Focus:Status
    Rank: E
    Classification: Supplementary
    Range:Short

    Description:After scavenging raw meats the user will treat the meat with their essence turning it into a jerky type meat with the flavor varying between the type of meat, this meat last a long time and does not need any types of extra treatment to keep fresh making a useful way to stockpile scavenged meats.


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    Re: Jades Techniques and styles

    Post by Vixen on Wed Dec 25, 2013 10:28 pm

    Ring and Triangle lower the speed to E-rank.
    Jerky is approved
    Nature's Blend you didn't listen to Fate's instructions so this is also not approved

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